Not bad, but there is some stuff to fix...
First in the drop there are some places were it clips and it makes awful distortion.
The sweeps and fx stuff are way too loud, I have to kinda lower the volume every transition because it hurts my ears :/
There is a weird chord going on in your chord progression, e.g. 1:08
Make your hi-hats in the drop louder, they give energy in the drop, expecially open hi-hat.
There is almost no bass in the song and if you listen with headphones, the stereo field is kinda weird (maybe just for me but idk)...
It has potencial tho, the melody is great :)